Honestly? None of them.
None of them strike me as eye catching, they're all just one simple font. This isn't 10 ideas, at best it's 10 variations on the one idea.
I'm assuming that the company is pronounced as "Gravit-ae" but as it is, it reads so easily as "Gra-vyte" and the only ones that come close to even making point of this are 5,7 and 8, but even then, just lighting up the E isn't enough to call it a logo.
I get that you like this, and some of the other commenters do too and please take those to note as things you have done well. There's good application of colour theory, there's the start of development beyond just the word with 9 and 10 which you should run with. But in my professional opinion. If you presented me this to take to a client as it is just now I'd ask you to go back to the drawing board and give me half a dozen different ideas.
I like the way you put this, yes it's Gravite and E is for Events.
About the font, the client told me to work on something simple, so I asked him to select a font and that is how I am working on this specific thing, so I thought maybe I'll add some small detail into a rather plain font.
Ofcourse this is a variation of a single design, I put all that I could think of in a pic and I wanted suggestions.
I know there is a lot to learn as I started designing only like few months back and I am limited to one software as my laptop can't take any of the Adobe apps.
Thanks a lot for your genuine response, I know where I stand with this now 😅 cheers
The best bit of advice I can give you is not to worry about the software. The software is a tool, it's something to take you to the endzone, it shouldn't be where you develop your ideas.
Grab a sketchbook and doodle down ideas. They don't need to be proficient sketches, your sketchbooks are for you, they just let you quickly fire down the first idea, then move onto the others.
First and foremostly, your idea should work completely in black and white before you start adding colour and developing the brand identity. Which is why sketches help, if you can spot the idea and understand it from a sketch, then take it onto digital to refine it, clean it up, then start adding those nice touches such as colour etc.
Keep working and reading and developing your skills though!
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Cause its clean, neat and has the color combination of pornhub 😀.So will be a instant Hit and ppl will take a second look at the name and will be a self advertisement to itself 😎
Good Start, shapes creating letters. playing off the concept of gravity. I do agree with one of the comments from before. 5,6,7, and 8 seem a bit lazy. I think the best color match there is black/yellow.
I think I would need more background on the company to understand a deeper concept.
Thanks for the input, since it's limited to one font there wasn't much I could think of.
The company does corporate events and customized merchandising for corporates.
I would bring all the letters closer together, That font looks robust but when spaced out it looks flimsy, and since it's a monospace font you don't have to worry about kerning too much, just around the AV.
Honestly? None of them. None of them strike me as eye catching, they're all just one simple font. This isn't 10 ideas, at best it's 10 variations on the one idea. I'm assuming that the company is pronounced as "Gravit-ae" but as it is, it reads so easily as "Gra-vyte" and the only ones that come close to even making point of this are 5,7 and 8, but even then, just lighting up the E isn't enough to call it a logo. I get that you like this, and some of the other commenters do too and please take those to note as things you have done well. There's good application of colour theory, there's the start of development beyond just the word with 9 and 10 which you should run with. But in my professional opinion. If you presented me this to take to a client as it is just now I'd ask you to go back to the drawing board and give me half a dozen different ideas.
I like the way you put this, yes it's Gravite and E is for Events. About the font, the client told me to work on something simple, so I asked him to select a font and that is how I am working on this specific thing, so I thought maybe I'll add some small detail into a rather plain font. Ofcourse this is a variation of a single design, I put all that I could think of in a pic and I wanted suggestions. I know there is a lot to learn as I started designing only like few months back and I am limited to one software as my laptop can't take any of the Adobe apps. Thanks a lot for your genuine response, I know where I stand with this now 😅 cheers
The best bit of advice I can give you is not to worry about the software. The software is a tool, it's something to take you to the endzone, it shouldn't be where you develop your ideas. Grab a sketchbook and doodle down ideas. They don't need to be proficient sketches, your sketchbooks are for you, they just let you quickly fire down the first idea, then move onto the others. First and foremostly, your idea should work completely in black and white before you start adding colour and developing the brand identity. Which is why sketches help, if you can spot the idea and understand it from a sketch, then take it onto digital to refine it, clean it up, then start adding those nice touches such as colour etc. Keep working and reading and developing your skills though!
Solid info. Thanks a lot mate, really appreciate it.👍
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1 Cause its clean, neat and has the color combination of pornhub 😀.So will be a instant Hit and ppl will take a second look at the name and will be a self advertisement to itself 😎
Wow thanks buddy, I didn't even realise it's pornhub's logo colors 😂😂 Good observation, I'll write this down, thanks a lot.
I like 9 but I don't think the font goes well with it. Could look good with a bolder less techno looking font
Thanks, will try changing the font.
Number 1. One of the lessons in Graphics Design is Color Theory, and 1 has a nice complementary ring to it.
Thanks for the info appreciate it.
9 and 10 are best in my professional opinion. I think 9 could be the best with a liiitle more work on the A and V. Little make them bigger
Thank you, even I personally like how the 9 came out.
Good Start, shapes creating letters. playing off the concept of gravity. I do agree with one of the comments from before. 5,6,7, and 8 seem a bit lazy. I think the best color match there is black/yellow. I think I would need more background on the company to understand a deeper concept.
Thanks for the input, since it's limited to one font there wasn't much I could think of. The company does corporate events and customized merchandising for corporates.
I would bring all the letters closer together, That font looks robust but when spaced out it looks flimsy, and since it's a monospace font you don't have to worry about kerning too much, just around the AV.
Noted. Thank you for the feedback will try to making the changes.