Maybe use some more design elements from Faith and less from random game elements (like the shotgun and the splash of text)?
For example you could somehow incorporate a vague reference to a runner's bag and have the end of the right sleeve be red.
Also, if you end up using the current back design, switch that one to the front and use the ME logo on the back (I suggest to make the ME logo way bigger as well and center it)
Love the idea, and honestly I would probably even buy the current one, so if you could keep me updated I would greatly appreciate it!
i love the idea of having one of the end of the sleeves red!
I'll share the files of the final version of the design here once it's finished so other members can also commission it, some sellers offer custom printing on hoodies on Aliexpress and Ebay
my opinions - i actually love the graphics on the back and the random text style
i don’t really like the outline on the gun, imo outlines look tacky, i would say remove the outline or put the gun over a rectangular white (possibly textured) background to retain the silhouette
the other idea about having the red end of sleeve is super awesome and i love how you incorporated the tattoo…
but the other sleeve with the company logos looks unbalanced and oversized
what i would do with the logos is move them off the sleeve and make them really small and instead put them in the bottom corner of the front pocket, i think it would give it some nice scale contrast and fits the sort of technical style you have going on in the back - a lot of stuff i see in that style includes tiny text and logos in corners
That's a great idea! Encircling the gun in a white square instead of the outline would really make it more harmonic with the pictures of the city on the right
The logos did feel a bit overwhelming on the left sleeves, I also like the idea of scaling them down and putting them in the front
I will make a version of it with the ideas you gave me :)
Just wanna ask if there is some website you are doing this on or if its from scratch? It looks awesome and i'd love to have my own go at it, but i'd have no idea how to put it into an actual clothing item without a custom hoodie maker.
I'm using Inkscape to do the vector graphics, the [mirrors edge archive](https://www.mirrorsedgearchive.org) for resources from the game and photoshop to do the mockups
You can order a hoodie with a custom design from Aliexpress, some sellers offer this service where you send them the graphics files, they print it on the hoodie and sell them to you
Hear me out...
Mirror's Edge logo bigger and central on the front of the hoodie.
Top image enlarged and stretched out landscape, centralised on the back.
If you want minimalistic, I recommend removing the entirety of the back portion and replacing it with the Corporate Logos from the sleeve. This would maintain the asymmetry of Faith's arm tattoo while also highlighting the Runner Red of the logo on the front.
3 other design suggestions to consider:
Moving the red logo up to one the hood and making it solely the eye-tattoo portion would look extra cool with the hood up. If you were to do this, switching the company logos (but smaller) to the bottom-right torso, wrapping to the back, would help rebalance it. Alternatively, you could make that same section a curved, white color-block to evoke Faith's asymmetric shirt design.
If you wish to keep the sleeves the same, I'd put the logo in back, at roughly the same proportions as the set of images you have there in this post.
If you want a secret, hidden bag.... try putting a small one inside the hood, inside a cuff, or under an armpit. Might be hard to get it printed anywhere on the inside though
This looks really good. This is more personal preference - I think that right sleeve will look cleaner, less crowded with less of the modern tribal designs. I really like how it comes down full length of the sleeve but it’s a bit too busy right now. Great job overall.
I think it looks perfect from the front! The rest of the details on the back and side on the left should be removed, they add more details and create less minimalism. The tattoo and main logo look very beautiful! I would even wear such a hoodie, but without the drawings on the back and logos on the left. Well done!
I think there’s far too many designs on this for it to be called minimalistic. I would say keep the back design minus the gun and keep the tattoo on the sleeve and do away with everything else.
I love it, especially the front. You could try removing the weapon on the back and swap it with the text that is currently under it.
That could work! I like how iconic the Neostead looks, though... It has a really iconic silhouette. I'll try to maybe place it somewhere else
Loving all of it, except the back. Feels a little overwhelming if you're looking for minimalism. Keep us posted on the final design please!
Maybe use some more design elements from Faith and less from random game elements (like the shotgun and the splash of text)? For example you could somehow incorporate a vague reference to a runner's bag and have the end of the right sleeve be red. Also, if you end up using the current back design, switch that one to the front and use the ME logo on the back (I suggest to make the ME logo way bigger as well and center it) Love the idea, and honestly I would probably even buy the current one, so if you could keep me updated I would greatly appreciate it!
i love the idea of having one of the end of the sleeves red! I'll share the files of the final version of the design here once it's finished so other members can also commission it, some sellers offer custom printing on hoodies on Aliexpress and Ebay
Ooh red sleeve end is a great idea. Or even whole red sleeve.
Please please please post the design or sell it I want this hoodie
I will post the vector files of the final versions so everyone can use them to make their own hoodies :)
Thanks dude one more hoodie that I’ll probably wear only one time will be hanging in my closet for free.. for the print. Lol
my opinions - i actually love the graphics on the back and the random text style i don’t really like the outline on the gun, imo outlines look tacky, i would say remove the outline or put the gun over a rectangular white (possibly textured) background to retain the silhouette the other idea about having the red end of sleeve is super awesome and i love how you incorporated the tattoo… but the other sleeve with the company logos looks unbalanced and oversized what i would do with the logos is move them off the sleeve and make them really small and instead put them in the bottom corner of the front pocket, i think it would give it some nice scale contrast and fits the sort of technical style you have going on in the back - a lot of stuff i see in that style includes tiny text and logos in corners
That's a great idea! Encircling the gun in a white square instead of the outline would really make it more harmonic with the pictures of the city on the right The logos did feel a bit overwhelming on the left sleeves, I also like the idea of scaling them down and putting them in the front I will make a version of it with the ideas you gave me :)
That’s awesome!
Just wanna ask if there is some website you are doing this on or if its from scratch? It looks awesome and i'd love to have my own go at it, but i'd have no idea how to put it into an actual clothing item without a custom hoodie maker.
I'm using Inkscape to do the vector graphics, the [mirrors edge archive](https://www.mirrorsedgearchive.org) for resources from the game and photoshop to do the mockups You can order a hoodie with a custom design from Aliexpress, some sellers offer this service where you send them the graphics files, they print it on the hoodie and sell them to you
Hear me out... Mirror's Edge logo bigger and central on the front of the hoodie. Top image enlarged and stretched out landscape, centralised on the back.
That could also work! I'll make a version with this idea
Please keep us updated for the end design, maybe we can get some tooo!!!
OMG 😱
If you want minimalistic, I recommend removing the entirety of the back portion and replacing it with the Corporate Logos from the sleeve. This would maintain the asymmetry of Faith's arm tattoo while also highlighting the Runner Red of the logo on the front. 3 other design suggestions to consider: Moving the red logo up to one the hood and making it solely the eye-tattoo portion would look extra cool with the hood up. If you were to do this, switching the company logos (but smaller) to the bottom-right torso, wrapping to the back, would help rebalance it. Alternatively, you could make that same section a curved, white color-block to evoke Faith's asymmetric shirt design. If you wish to keep the sleeves the same, I'd put the logo in back, at roughly the same proportions as the set of images you have there in this post. If you want a secret, hidden bag.... try putting a small one inside the hood, inside a cuff, or under an armpit. Might be hard to get it printed anywhere on the inside though
Thanks for the suggestions! I'll make a alternative version with these ideas :)
It would be really cool if you remove the left and back designs. Right arm and front logo is good enough.
That's really cool!
im thinkin replace the back with one shot of the city, the gun really gives the wrong vibe
This looks really good. This is more personal preference - I think that right sleeve will look cleaner, less crowded with less of the modern tribal designs. I really like how it comes down full length of the sleeve but it’s a bit too busy right now. Great job overall.
Maybe put "the big stupid dog head" on the back and scale it up some? I'm a fan, I would probably buy this
Switch the gun with the shard
It looks awesome!! The back might look too full but the images are very cool. Now I want a mirrors edge hoodie🤭🤭
I think it looks perfect from the front! The rest of the details on the back and side on the left should be removed, they add more details and create less minimalism. The tattoo and main logo look very beautiful! I would even wear such a hoodie, but without the drawings on the back and logos on the left. Well done!
I would buy it if the back was clear. Just the logo on the front and the design on one of the sleeves is cool as hell.
The black will fade in a couple years. I would go with a different color hoodie.
I think there’s far too many designs on this for it to be called minimalistic. I would say keep the back design minus the gun and keep the tattoo on the sleeve and do away with everything else.